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  考场高分作文六个一〈2〉2020欧洲杯苹果下载。古人早有“凤头、猪肚、豹尾”之说,就是说文章开头要小而美丽,中间要内容充实有分量,结尾要短而有力,这也应成为我们的写作追求。我们将用三节课分别进行介绍。

2020欧洲杯苹果下载  suhuashuo:wanshikaitounan。yinweiwenzhangkaitoudehaohuaizhijieyingxiangquanwendechengbai,haodekaitounengqidaolakaiwenzhangdeweimu,yinlingwenmaidedezuoyong,juyoutongshuaiquanpianzhigongxiao。neime,zenyangdekaitoucaijuyouzheiyangdebiaodaxiaoguoni?mingdaidexiezhenshuo:“qijudangrubaozhu,zhouxiangyiche。”qingrenliyushuo:“kaijuanzhichu,dangyiqijuduomu,shizhiyijianerjing,buganqiqu。”

  ru:zaichaoxiandemeiyitian,wodoubeiyixieshiqingzhe;wodesixiangdechaoshuizaibenliuzhe;tashiwoxiangbayiqiedongxidougaosuwozuguodepengyoumen…… ——《sheishizuikeaideren》

2020欧洲杯苹果下载  youyipianzuowendetimushi《wodejiaxiang》,tadekaitoushizheiyangde:“pengyou,nidaoguowodejiaxiangma?nidengguowojiaxiangdeshan、youguowojiaxiangdeshui、chiguowojiaxiangdefeiliyuma?”

2020欧洲杯苹果下载  jiyouyuyangxianyiheyuyixianyangliangzhong,kaipiandeganqingjidiaohezhengwendeganqingjidiaoxiangduihuoxiangfan,yikaitouduibijiwen,shiwenzhanggancaifengfu,jiuquhuichang,nairenxunwei,yishuxiaoguoqianglie。shiyongyushuqingsanwen。

2020欧洲杯苹果下载  ru:zongshitingtongzhuotanqimama,shuomamaruheguanxinta,ruhetitieta。neime,wodemamani?wo?aixiwo?kenengshiba。buguo,worenweitashigebutaorenaidemama。niyidingbuxin,neimeqingtingwoshuo。 ——《butaorenaidemama》

  yitijiweikaitou,huochanshuxingwenyuanyou,huoqianyinneirong,huowenzhi,qiyuyanwangwangjinglianerfuyou。congzhongtoushiqiliangdian,chumodaoqiqinggandemaibo,rangrenshangxinyuemu。

  (jiangrizibizuohuahuade、huanhuandezhangzhongxishanengjirenyituranyiwuzhigan。 sha,zheibenshenjiuhenfuyoudongganhemeigan,dianchurizizhibenzhi,tieqieerbaohan,jiezhezuozheyiyishiliudeshoufafanjianrizizhongdelingluansuipianyizishengdezitaisikaochengzhangdehuati,yutijihunranyiti。)

  shili:ganxiefuyulerenleizheizhongmeilideganshou:taozui,qishizaipijuandeshihou,yebuyinggaiwangjijizijiliuyifangrangxinchangyangdetiankong。 ——《taozui》

  (zuozhexianzaikaipianyitijidefangshiquanshizijiduitaozuidelijie:buzhishuyumouzhongmanyidejingjie,yinggaishiyizhongxiangshou,shiyizhongxinlingdexiuqi。wenzihenmei,yiyungengmei。)

  yunyongyixiangdiejiashuipingzhigaodangtuiyuanqudajiamazhiyuanle,neiqiangujuechang“kutenglaoshuhunya,xiaoqiaoliushuirenjia”,jianjiandandanshiergezi,bianjiangqiqieyouyuanzhiyijingbiaoxiandelinlijinzhi。zheizhongbayouguanderenshi、wujingdeciyujihubujiaxiushididiefangzaiyiqideshoufa,wangwangnengshiwenzhangdeyuqihenjuyouzhanglihedanxing,qidaosiliangboqianjindezuoyong。

2020欧洲杯苹果下载  (duanduandeshiergezicaiyonglehuihuan、fanfudexiucishoufa,xunsujiangneixiekunzaixiaoyuanlidandiao,wunai、zhouerfushidexuezishenghuoxingxiangdigoulechulai,shineiyangzhenqiehelingrensisuo)

2020欧洲杯苹果下载  weibiaodazhongxindexuyao,youxiekaoshengxinshounianlai,jiangjiyizhongxianchengdeshici、liuxinggequtianhuanxindeneirong,wangwangmiaoquhengsheng,lingrenpaianjiaojue。

  shili:zuoyeyuelangxingxi,chendubuzhipijuan,shiwencuiworen,quedaolanchongyige,zhifouzhifou,dushuquweiduoduo。 ——《neinianwoshiliu》

  (zuozhejieyongliqingzhaode《rumengling》gaibianercheng,huoshengshengdizaixianlesushexiang:yourendushuguawei,lianchuangbuqi,yourenyushu,chenduguodu。)

  wenzhangkaitoudexiefashiduozhongduoyangde,zheilibuguotishileqizhongchangjiandejizhong。zaixiezuodangzhong,youshibingbunengdanyidishiyongmouyizhongfangfa,ershijizhongfangfajianeryouzhi。jiujingshiyongshenmefangfakaitou,yaocongwenzhangdezhengtigousichufakaolv,yaocongbiaoxianzhongxinsixiangdexuyaochufa,tongpiananpaizhengtisheji,xuanzezuiqiadangdekaitoufangfa。zongzhi,yikaishijiunengbaduzhexiyinzhudekaitoujiushiyigehaokaitou。

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